A good effort Tom; you need to fully explain your ideas and how they link to key concepts such as male gaze. You're using the terminology but with not much explanation as to how that's backed up. Always consider if you've discussed the 'how' and the 'why'.
A good effort Tom; you need to fully explain your ideas and how they link to key concepts such as male gaze. You're using the terminology but with not much explanation as to how that's backed up. Always consider if you've discussed the 'how' and the 'why'.
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